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“Words like ‘steal’ and ‘thief’ are so limiting… I acquire the forbidden.” — Spoilers for Past Due follow.

An attempt to create a cohesive timeline for the Good Intentions Series by Elliott Kay, covering both the history before the series start and the relative order and chronology of the published stories.

Introduction[]

This is an attempt to create a cohesive timeline for the Good Intentions Series. It is very much a work in progress, and doubtlessly contains errors in various forms. See also § Analysis.

It is partially based on the timeline that Elliott Kay posted on Patreon on July 4 2022: Timelines and Links: Good Intentions. For a less detailed chronological order, see the Good Intentions Reading Order.

The backstory covers a very long history, but each book only covers a limited time, usually around a week.

Good Intentions and the series proper starts in September Year 0 in the below list.

All years use CE and BCE notations.⁠[Note 1]

Before start of series[]

BCE years[]

Year Event Reference
c. 1300 BCE The Family rises and ravages eastern Mediterranean; PaD 20
c. 1280 BCE Onyx’s first incarnation catches Joel; Onyx escapes from the Family to Egypt. PaD 20; PaD 2
c. 1175 BCE Malike curses Onyx’s second incarnation. PaD 10
c. 1000 BCE Beletsune murders Milkilu; she is recruited by Baal and transformed into Lorelei. NC 14; HHPF
BCE years Lorelei begins an illicit relation with Sammael. PeD 11 & 13
c. 600–400 BCE Zafirah steals a book from the library of Heaven; she is caught by Rachel. PeD 18; PaD 8
490 BCE The Athenian (Alex) is killed at Marathon as a young Greek farmer. GI 13
c. 50–45 BCE Scipio (Alex) is murdered by his master after saving him; Donald is now Alex’s guardian angel. GI 14

CE years[]

Year Event Reference
70 CE Lorelei is present at the Roman siege of Jerusalem. GI 4
c. 400 CE Lorelei is claimed as a prize by Belial. GI 16 & PeD 16
c. 750–1000 CE Skorri (Alex) is abandoned; takes revenge on Valgard and sons. GI 15 & NC 1
c. 1000 CE Serena is turned into a succubus. LSHL
1096 CE John (Alex) joins the First Crusade under Robert Curthose. GI 13
1098 CE John is killed by Lydia during the Siege of Antioch; encounter between Lorelei and Lydia. GI 4 & 13
1517 CE Rachel brings messages to Martin Luther; she breaks with Vincent. GI 15
c. 1793–1794 CE Lorelei is abandoned in Paris by Lester during the Reign of Terror. LSS
c. 1825 Sunday is born. PaCS
1827–1828 CE One of Alex’s past lives is active in South Africa. GI 17
c. 1840 Sunday is the sacrifice in an attempted immortality ritual. PaCS
c. 1880 CE Tom (Alex) fights the Ambrose gang. GI 14
1915–1918 CE Aidan (Alex) dies saving Westerbrook. NC 2
c. 1920s CE Cornelius arrives in Los Angeles PaCS
−71 Roy Carlisle is born. PeD 1
c. −70 Elizabeth Van Dalen moves to Seattle. LSA
c. 1944–1945 CE Simon (Alex) and Marie meet in Paris and are engaged. GI prologue
c. 1944 CE Lorelei—as Sofia—is active in Nazi-occupied Europe, with Jurgen as known prey. GI 12
1945 CE Simon (Alex) dies saving Elena (Onyx) and George; the Family nearly catches Elena in Paris. GI prologue; LSHL; PaD prologue
1940s CE Anatole arrives in Los Angeles. PaCS
c. 1970 CE Michelle is born. PeD 1
c. 1971 CE Will (Alex) dies saving Roy Carlisle.⁠[Note 2] GI 16 & PeD 1
−32 Kevin Murray is born. LSNJ
c. −30 Lorelei has Nicolas as her prey and befriends Stelia. PaAm
−28 Shannon Abrams is born. LSHL
−24 Amber Maddox is born. NC 12
−23 Molly Murray and Evan Murphy are born.
−21 Onyx, Sierra, and Drew are born.
−20 Wade, Taylor, Jason, and Alex are born.
c. −10 Michelle divorces Alex’s father. SVTY
−6 Sierra starts working for the Native circle. PeD 14
−4 Molly and Onyx meets; Elizabeth confronts Leon and the Light. PeD prologue
−3 Garrison is expelled from the Brotherhood of Apollo. GI 14
−2 Kevin Murray joins the Seattle Police Department. LSNJ
−2 Lorelei is active in Washington DC. PeD 16
c. −1 Belial directs Lorelei to Seattle; Gerard and Lorelei meet again; Lorelei claims Benjamin. PaAP
−1 Wade joins the Army; Alex is rejected. GI 9
−1 Alex starts at North Seattle Community College. GI 5

Year 0[]

Time Event Reference
Early January Lorelei murders Damon Bell. GI 8; NC 4
Winter Elizabeth is murdered by Leon with assistance from Evelyn. PeD 5 & PeD 23
Early spring Elizabeth’s will is read; Molly and Onyx learn more about Seattle’s Practitioners. LSA
Early summer Jason plans a pulpy role-playing campaign; Amanda and Eric are summoned by Bel-Danab. DHA
Late June or early July Wednesday: Kevin in shooting; celebrates birthday with Molly and Onyx. LSNJ
Thursday: Kevin spends his day naked.
Friday: Kevin is in a naked shootout and car chase; he hooks up with Claudio Espinosa.
August Lydia and Carlos Medina are married and move to Seattle. GI 13
The Brotherhood of Apollo murders an old Russian woman and Practitioner in Tukwila. GI 14
August or September Wade starts EMT program at North Seattle Community College. GI 13
Diana is taken captive by Anastacia’s Court. NC 3

September Year 0[]

At some point in September, Katerina becomes Katerina Sorrow.⁠[1][2]

Good Intentions (September)[]

Day Event Reference
Monday Alex rescues Rachel and Lorelei during the Sacred Heart Cemetery Fire; Donald abandons Alex. GI 1–2
Tuesday Alex and Lorelei make love. GI 3–5
Wednesday Alex meets Rachel again; discovering Raymond Cordingly; the Pacific Place events. GI 5–9
Thursday The pool hall fight with Robert Gorge. GI 9–10
Friday Onyx and Alex has date and make love; Alex and Lorelei meet Lydia. GI 11–12
Saturday Sherri’s party; Lydia meets Lady Anastacia. GI 13
Sunday Molly and Onyx rebuffs the Brotherhood; Lydia meets Lord Stefan. GI 14
Monday Lydia summons Baal; Alex and Rachel make love; Battle of Blackthorne Manor. GI 15–18
Tuesday Rachel replaces Vincent as Dominion. GI 19

After Good Intentions[]

Alex, Lorelei, and Rachel move into Suite 1705 in mid-late September. Jason also moves into his own apartment during the same period. Drew also moves, though possibly a bit later.

Note Day Event Reference
Directly after GI Tuesday or Wednesday Michelle and Alex discuss Lorelei. SVDM
Week after GI Sunday, Monday, or Tuesday Alex, Lorelei, and Rachel take tour of Suite 1705. SVLL
Mid September Alex, Lorelei, and Rachel move into Suite 1705; Jason moves into his apartment. SVLC
Late September Amanda and Eric returns. DHA
Late September Jason has Great Open Teamspeak Mic incident with Amanda. DHA; NC2
Late September Monday–Friday Alex adjusts to living with Lorelei and Rachel. SVLC
Late September Rachel has a rough day. Lorelei starts work at the conservatory. SVRD

October Year 0[]

According to the Patreon timeline, “Secret Shoppers” occurs before “Minor Errands”, following the order of their writing. However, the timeline shown below assumes that the stories in Small Victories are presented in chronological order, placing “Minor Errands” before “Secret Shoppers”. “Minor Errands” is set on a Monday or Friday since these are the known days for Alex’s photography class.⁠[3][4]

Note Day Event Reference
Early October Amber joins the Special Task Force. NC prologue
Early October Monday or Friday Alex goes shopping and finds a vampire. SVME
Early October Friday to Saturday Alex and Lorelei go lingerie shopping. They have an extensive tryout session. SVSS
Early October Rachel has a lot to unpack when it comes to her desire for Lorelei. HHCC
October Taylor and Brendan start dating. PeD 4
Late October Monday? Amber Maddox arrests Marvin Kowalski. NC Pr

Natural Consequences (October)[]

The timeline for Natural Consequences is tricky on the weekend, and currently there is a missing day. Note that Halloween for Life and Natural Consequences are happening concurrently. Halloween for Life also says the concert is two days after Shannon’s talk with Lorelei, not three or four as implied here.

The dates given in the books also do not line up. October 22 is said to be a Tuesday.⁠[5] That would make October 31 and Halloweeen a Thursday, but the Emerald City Halloween Ball happens on a Saturday.⁠[6]

Day Event Reference
Monday Rachel kills Serena; Serena’s spirit is absorbed by Shannon. Shannon hooks up with Kevin Murray. LSHL
Tuesday Rachel and Lorelei seek out Shannon; Alex is fired from Keating & Rose and meets Diana again. LSHL; NC 1
Wednesday Amber meets Jason and the Crew; Cornelius and Wentworth team up; Diana kills Caleb and takes leadership of Caleb’s pack. NC 2–3
Thursday The Special Task Force investigation continues; Alex turns in motorcycle for service. NC 4
Friday unclear
Saturday Emerald City Halloween Ball; Battle of the Bus Tunnel; Shannon and Rachel meet. NC 5–9; LSHL

November Year 0[]

Natural Consequences (November)[]

It is assumed that November 31 falls on a Saturday.

Day Event Reference
Sunday Lorelei and Diana meet; Molly, Onyx, and Alex perform memory ritual and make love. NC 10–11
Monday Alex, Lorelei, and Jason arrested by the Special Task Force; Battle of Magnuson Park. NC 12–18
Tuesday Amber and Jason make love; Donald is judged and demoted. NC 18

After Natural Consequences[]

The order of “Trust” and “This Year, I’m Thankful For…” will partially depend on how exactly the weekdays of November falls.

Sometime in November or December, Taylor meets Drew, Jason, and Wade at the pool hall and learns of the events in Natural Consequences.⁠[7]

Note Day Event Reference
canon? First Friday in November Alex does a good deed on bus 358. OBLI
Second week in November weekday? Alex and Lorelei visit a demon strip club. LSS
Second Friday in November Molly and Onyx sexperiment with Alex. SVDN
Third Thursday in November Lorelei’s car is stolen and she sets out to retreive it. Alex has second date with Molly and Onyx. LCTr
November Alex and Lorelei plan for Thanksgiving. SVTY

December Year 0[]

Note Day Event Reference
Early December Runs through the month Alex sets out to test the limits of Lorelei’s appreciation for consensual porn. LCMNQ
Early December Friday and Saturday Alex helps Molly and Onyx investigate House 12573. PaMTF
week before Christmas first day Alex asks Rachel and Lorelei about Christmas presents. LCSG
second day Lorelei and Alex go on good deeds spree.

Personal Demons (December)[]

Like with Natural Consequences, there seems to be an elided night in the weekend that ends Personal Demons. Note that Year 1 starts at chapter 4 of this book.

Day Event Reference
Christmas Eve Family Christmas for Alex and Drew. PeD 1
Between Christmas and NYE Molly and Onyx move into House 12573. PeD 3
New Years Eve Molly and Onyx host NYE party and craft love charm for Drew. PeD 2–3

Year 1[]

Personal Demons fall on both year 0 and year 1, with January year 1 beginning with chapter 4.

January Year 1[]

Personal Demons (January)[]

Day Location Event Reference
Sunday Seattle Alex and Lorelei meet Claire PeD 4
Monday Seattle Kate invites Molly and Onyx to Practitioner meeting; Alex and Drew start at University of Washington. PeD 4–5
Friday Seattle Sammael turns up; Battle of the Casino; Drew and Sierra meet. PeD 6–8
Saturday Iraq Fight in compound in Iraq. PeD 9
Friday Seattle Aftermath of the Battle of the Casino. PeD 10–11
Saturday Iraq & Syria Running fight in Iraq; Alex gets to Damascus. PeD 12–13 & 15
Saturday Seattle Contact with Hector; Amber arrives. PeD 14–15
Sunday Seattle & Hell Lorelei returns to Hell and claims the iron crown. PeD 16
Sunday evening Lebanon Alex gets to Beirut and meets Zafirah. PeD 17–18
Sunday Hell Lorelei initiates the Battle of Perdition. PeD 19, 21
Sunday Seattle Battle of Suite 1705. PeD 20, 23
Monday Lebanon Alex and Rachel returns to Seattle. PeD 22
Sunday Seattle Fight with Sammael; aftermath of Battle of Suite 1705. PeD 24
Monday Seattle Drew and Sierra start dating; Rachel demoted to guardian. PeD 25

After Personal Demons[]

Day Event Reference
unclear Zafirah starts investigating Rico’s team. PeD epilogue
Week after PeD Rachel and Alex hunts a demon on the loose. SVGN
Friday after PeD Drew and Sierra has their first planned date. PeD 25
Late January Lorelei has wants for Alex, but greater needs interfere. PaWN

February Year 1[]

Day Event Reference
February 14 Alex treats Rachel and Lorelei to a Valentine’s Day dinner. PaVD

Can’t Stab Everything” falls in February and March. It is non-canonical and describes the Crew reacting to the COVID-19 pandemic.

March Year 1[]

Day Event Reference
Mid-March Rachel is supportive of Alex’s supportive relationships. HHSR

Past Due (March)[]

Most of the story falls during spring break.

Day Event Reference
Monday or Tuesday Alex and friends arrested for anti-fascist brawl; Molly and Onyx meet Kate and Jin. PaD 1–3
Monday or Tuesday night (Egypt) The Family raid a musuem in Alexandria; Zafirah intervenes. PaD 4
Monday or Tuesday night (Seattle) Zafirah contacts Alex. PaD 5
Tuesday or Wednesday Alex breaks into Masood’s penthouse. PaD 6–8
Wednesday or Thursday Planning. PaD 9
Friday Travel to Vancouver. PaD 10–11
Saturday Family party. PaD 12–20
Sunday The Family takes to sea; Battle of the Silver Delta. PaD 21–28
Monday Return to Vancouver. PaD 28
following week Aftermath of events. PaD epilogue

After Past Due[]

Note Day Event Reference
Mid-March, shortly after Past Due weekday Lorelei and Alex watch porn together and talk about her history. HHPF
Friday Lorelei and Alex are wildly inappropriate during a night at the ballet.
Late March Friday Alex, Molly, and Onyx go to an occult book faire. HHL
Late March probably weekday The International circle is in a pickle, and asks Alex for help. HHOS
Late March Drew and Alex help Leticia collect an armoire from a cult. HHGu

April Year 1[]

Note Day Event Reference
Early April non-canon? weekday Lorelei spots professional opportunities for Alex. PaLP
Sunday A tryst at a housewarming party.
Early April Weekday evening Alex receives a message from a woman followed by a stalker. LCSt
April Weekday evening Alex runs a D&D game for Rachel and Lorelei. LCAc
Sunday Alex, Taylor, and Jason go to Ms. Fosse’s memorial. Alex confronts a corrupt police officer.
April Lorelei sees a stolen piece of art, and sets out to return it to its rightful owner. LCAm
Heist consultations with Sierra.
Lorelei approaches Ben Palmer in disguise.
Lorelei meets Ben Palmer in disguise again; Alex breaks and enters.
Lorelei and Alex impersonate FBI agents.
The crew gets a job as movers.
April? Two proselytizers call at Suite 1705. Lorelei answers the door. PaTT

May Year 1[]

Note Day Event Reference
late May weekday Alex meets Cynthia, who is hot as hell. PaRF

Summer Year 1[]

Note Day Event Reference
Summer Gerard, a money launderer, needs urgent help from Lorelei. PaAP


Evan Murphy stories[]

The Evan Murphy stories begin at some point after Past Due, with a tentative working title of Grand Theft Sorcery.

Note Day Event Reference
Night 1 Evan and Mitu team up. PaGR
Night 1 The cats need rescue, but the bounty hunters are closing in. PaCN
weekday Late night 1 The Shadows of LA are abuzz. PaCo
Day 1 Evan’s attempts to get rid of the Lamborghini backfires. PaCo; PaDR
Day 1 Evan and Sunday bond over truth and tacos, but get a surprise welcome in Sunday’s home. PaCS; PaPe
Night 2 An attempt to connect with the street racing scene with mixed results. But they find a race in the end. PaPa; PaUp
Day 2 Evan and Sunday have had the chance to catch up on sleep, cats, plans, and second-guessing their feelings. They pay a visit to Omar and set a plan in motion. PaSD; PaPn; PaGy
Night 3 A—reverse?—home invasion. PaSMC

Analysis[]

Creating a fully detailed timeline is likely impossible. This is apart from later works supplanting earlier works in som cases, continuity errors between published works, the works having no fixed timeline as they were written, errors from collation, or errors in interpretation.

Fundamentally, the stories seem to be set in a floating timeline, based on the year they were written. This is similar to many comic books. Natural Consequences has a reference to Tuesday, October 22nd, which fits with 2013. Personal Demons has a reference to Saturday, January 9th, which does not fit 2013 or 2014, but does fit 2016.

Abbreviations[]

DHA
Days of High Adventure
GI
Good Intentions
HHCC
Clear Communication” in Habitual Heroes
HHGu
Guardians” in Habitual Heroes
HHL
Legitimacy” in Habitual Heroes
HHOS
Outsourced” in Habitual Heroes
HHPF
Proper Focus” in Habitual Heroes
HHSR
Supportive Relationships” in Habitual Heroes
LCAc
Accomplished
LCAm
Amends
LCMNQ
A Most Noble Quest
LCSG
The Spirit of Giving
LCSt
Strangers
LCTr
Trust
LSA
Authenticity” in Life in Shadows
LSHL
Halloween for Life in Life in Shadows
LSNJ
Naked Justice” in Life in Shadows
LSS
Skin in Life in Shadows
NC
Natural Consequences
OBLI
On the Bus: Lewd Intentions
PaCN
Celestial Navigation” on Patreon
PaCo
Constellations” on Patreon
PaCS
Charting Stars” on Patreon
PaD
Past Due
PaDR
Dead Reckoning” on Patreon
PaGR
God on the Run” on Patreon
PaGy
Gravity” on Patreon
PaLP
Like a Professional” on Patreon
PaMNF
More Than Friends” on Patreon
PaPa
Pathfinding” on Patreon
PaPe
Perihelion” on Patreon
PaPn
Penumbra” on Patreon
PaRF
Red Flags” on Patreon
PaSD
Stellar Drift” on Patreon
PaSMC
So Many Crimes” on Patreon
PaTT
Tempted and Tested” on Patreon
PaUp
Upshift” on Patreon
PaVD
Valentine’s Day” on Patreon
PaWN
Wants and Needs” on Patreon
PeD
Personal Demons
SVDM
Don’t Make It Weird” in Small Victories
SVDN
Date Night” in Small Victories
SVGN
Good Neighbors” in Small Victories
SVLC
Lifestyle Changes” in Small Victories
SVLL
Live Like This” in Small Victories
SVME
Minor Errands” in Small Victories
SVRD
Rough Day” in Small Victories
SVSS
Secret Shoppers” in Small Victories
SVTY
This Year, I’m Thankful For…” in Small Victories

Notes[]

  1. Since Rachel is particular about blasphemy.
  2. The timing of Will’s death is tricky, given that Roy’s age is given as 71 at the start of Personal Demons, and it is implied that Michelle had been born at that time. At the same time, Roy should not be too old in Vietnam.

References[]

  1. Past Due, chapter 22
  2. Past Due, chapter 29
  3. Good Intentions, chapter 5
  4. Good Intentions, chapter 15
  5. Natural Consequences, Prologue
  6. Natural Consequences, chapter 10
  7. Personal Demons, chapter 4
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