“Proper Focus” is a novelette published in Habitual Heroes in 2021. Lorelei watch porn with Alex and tells more of her history. They are wildly inappropriate at the ballet.
Warning[]
“It’s pretty much all sexy talk and sexytimes. Sometimes the porn is the plot. :)”[1]
“Proper Focus” also contains explicit language, breaking and entering, premeditated public indecency, analysis of adult film, assertive sex, sex in a stranger’s office, sex under the table, feminism, lust, party fouls, consensual sexual misconduct in public, portrayals of divine and demonic matters bearing little or no resemblance to religious canon, sexual power exchange, even more explicit sex, innuendo, and a casual disregard for traditional Western family values.
Synopsis[]
Lorelei and Alex watched a porn movie, discussed its emphasis on consent, and why that was important to Alex. Lorelei told him more about her motivation to become a succubus and her experiences in Hell.
The following Friday they were wildly inappropriate first at the restaurant and then at the ballet.
Appearances[]
Characters[]
- Lorelei
- Alex Carlisle
- Rachel (mentioned only)
- Baal (mentioned only)
- unnamed porn actors, innocent bystanders, oblivious servers, and upscale scandalized socialites
Locations & organizations[]
- Suite 1705
- A posh restaurant
- The ballet
- The conservatory (mentioned only)
- Hell (mentioned only)
Continuity[]
The story is set in mid-March, shortly after Past Due.[2][3]
Publication history[]
“Proper Focus” was first published on Elliott Kay’s Patreon in August 2020. It was re-published in Habitual Heroes in December 2021.
References[]
- ↑ Story Post: Proper Focus (GI) (Elliott Kay’s Patreon, August 10, 2020)
- ↑ [https://www.patreon.com/elliottkay/ Elliott Kay’s Patreon, August 2020]
- ↑ Timelines and Links: Good Intentions (Elliott Kay’s Patreon, July 4, 2022)